Prorep 34: Fiddling

I’m turning sentences this like:

A small stippled fish darted forth from the fool’s gold to nibble at the tree’s roots.

into sentences like this:

A small stippled fish nibbled the tree’s roots.

I may turn them back again.  Because fiddling.

2 responses to “Prorep 34: Fiddling

  1. Yes but where is the squeaky snake? And is it hungry for stippled fish?

  2. Squeaky snake is in Zoe’s jaws, incapable of pursuing fish.

What do you think?